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新托福独立写作解析;交聪明的朋友还是幽默的朋友?

2017-04-17 10:48:49来源：新东方在线整理

　　这道题是属于利弊分析题型，难度较低

　　新托福独立写作范文二;

　　从make friends with intelligent people角度答题：

　　开头段：Friends are those who have confidence in you and offer assistance to you unconditionally(无条件帮忙); They are always there no matter what happens. On a practical level, friends benefit us in many ways due to the valuable characteristics that they are in possession of(拥有). Then which characteristic of a friend is more attractive, being intelligent or humorous? From my perspective, I attach greater importance to(更加重视) intelligence of friends than the sense of humor.

　　中心句：Making friends with intelligent people affords us the opportunity to achieve self-improvement. 解释句：There is no denying that ingenious people must possess certain significant characteristics making them stand out among the peers. By making friends with them, we are more likely to be positively influenced by them and obtain the important quality and effective methods in dealing with problems we confront in our life, thus increasing the possibility of fulfilling our goals. 举例论证：For example, playing with those who are able to manage their time efficiently helps us foster the ability to plan and organize. Also, talking with a person who enjoys favorable social relationship contributes to the cultivation of our excellent communicating skills. What’s more, learning about a friend who succeeds in realizing his dream through hard work motivates us to set a practical goal and work toward it continuously. Therefore we tend to acquire a myriad of(无数的) wholesome characteristics by building friendship with intelligent people.

　　中心句：On a more practical level, we have a better chance to come up with creative solutions to the problems we are faced with in our life with the help of ingenious friends. 解释句：It is not uncommon that we have to meet a multitude of(许多) problems or get in trouble that wemay find difficult to resolve. 对比论证：However, intelligent friends, being analytical and insightful, never fail to offer advice and guidance that are of great help(有助于) in overcoming these difficulties. Chances are that friends with intelligence help us analyze the situation in an efficient way, correct the mistakes we have made in seeking for solutions and predict the results that our decisions may yield to ensure our successful going through hard times. Thanks to the wisdom and level-headedness(冷静) of intelligent friends we have, there is no need for us to worry about the difficulties we may be confronted with either in our study or work.

　　让步段：Admittedly, friends with a good sense of humor could bring us jokes and joy and make our life full of happiness. We may have fun when staying along with humorous friends. Nevertheless, at times of sorrow, it is ingenious friends who surprisingly manage to drive off(击退) our loneliness and sadness due to the fact that they are able to comfort us in a comparatively rational way rather than just make us laugh and forget about the adversity.

　　重申观点：Hence, it is more desirable to have intelligent friends than friends with a good sense of humor.总结分论点：Not only can ingenious friends provide assistance that contributes toy our success and that makes it possible for you to overcome difficulties, but also theycould better satisfy your psychological needs when you are in bad mood than humorous friends do.

　　以上就是新东方在线托福网为你带来的新托福独立写作解析;交聪明的朋友还是幽默的朋友?，更多精彩敬请关注新东方在线托福网（http://toefl.koolearn.com）。

本文关键字: 2017年4月15日托福 托福写作考试回忆

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