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2018年9月15日托福写作考试题目解析【新东方】

2018-09-17 14:02:23来源:新东方

  9月15日托福考试结束后,针对托福写作部分,新东方老师也为大家带来了相关题目的解析,相信对于还在备考托福的考生,有很大的帮助。下面就让我们来看看具体的内容吧!

  来源:新东方 魏雨来

【点击查看2018年9月15&16日托福考试题目回忆汇总】

  Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.

  翻译:下面两个选择哪一个更好?花钱去旅行,还是为未来存钱。

  题思路:

  这是一个第二维度比较对比类的题,应该分析双方利弊进行比较。考试的时候挑自己比较花朵的一方去写即可。

  比如这里以 花钱旅行>存钱 为例,说一下思路

  理由段1:旅行可以逃离工作,给人放松,以便以后更好的工作效率。

  理由段2:结交朋友(tour pal旅游),扩展社交圈,开阔眼界(broaden one’s horizon)

  让步段:承认,为未来存钱可以预防风险,但是我们也有解决方法(However, this is not the case in reality.)万一真的遇到风险,我们可以贷款,或者提前买点保险,不需要存很多钱。不如拿这些钱去放松,或者提升自己。

  下面给大家放出一篇新东方老师写的范文,扩展一下思路:

  Just as the old saying goes, “Money isn'teverything, but humans can never do without it.” (名人名言背景介绍)Nowadays anincreasing number of people tend to choose to spend money travelling around theworld, while some people prefer saving money for the future to lead a betterlife.(同义改写题目)From my perspective, it is better to spend money on traveling thanjust save it in the bank. (自己观点)

  To begin with, travelling providestemporary escape from long period of hard work, and could lead us to work moreefficiently afterwords.(课上讲的万能理由之relax和success, 大家relax可以同义替换为loosen up和temporary escape)Travelling in a peaceful place enables us to relax, to forget aboutthe intense work and to enjoy the beautiful scenery. Take myself as an example.I work as a data scientist and last year I helped the largest healthcarecompany to design a health monitoring software. To deal with it, 12 hours wasspent each day to work on the coding part, and 2 more hours each day to designthe interface of the software to attract the customers. After keeping workinglike this for a month, I felt too much overwhelmed. Thus, I applied for a leaveto go to Singapore for vacation. During the two-week tour, I enjoyed thebeatiful Botanic Garden, walked on the soft Sentosha beach and had plenty ofdelicious sea food. This enabled me to be totally refreshed and forgot aboutthe fatigue I experienced weeks earlier. Later, I returned to my office, andfinished my project. Both our client and my boss were satisfied.So it is quiteeasy to conclude that travelling really benefits our life in that it helps toloosen ourselves up and work more efficiently.

  What’s more, chances are large that people’shorizon will be broadened when travelling around the globe, through seeingvarious cultures and exchanging ideas with people from all walks of life. Ifyou travel in China, you can get immersed in the long history of 5000 years; ifyou travel in Europe, you can learn how to live a romantic and peaceful life;if you travel in the United States, you can experience the modern atmosphere ofthis information age.

  Admittedly, saving money for future canhelp us to cope with potential risks more smoothly in the future. However, inreality it is not the case if insurance and loans are taken into consideration.Once a risk happens, people can always apply for loans, and discreet peoplealways buy insurance in advance. Therefore, the money may well be spent onthings we can benefit from, such as travelling, just as mentioned above.

  To draw a conclusion, it is much better to spend moneyon traveling on a vacation with your family or friends to relax your mind andbody. Meanwhile, you can also save the rest of money to guarantee your nexttraveling as well as your future.


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