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2020-04-23 13:21:00来源：网络

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　"Students are more interested in politics today than before." Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

　　立场【Disagree】

　　Introduction：

　　Never before have politics been so transparent and so obvious. [倒装结构，可以尝试积累使用，拿到“句法” 分; Never before have film sequels been so varied. ] It is understandable for some people to believe that students show more interest in political events today than theircounterparts [地位相等的人，作用相同的物] previously.[It is understandable…增加句法多样性] However, I have to rebut the statement. [开门见山给出观点]

　　Body1：

　　While it is unfair to demonize [妖魔化v.] today's politics, it is fair to say it is not as desirable as is thought.à [中心句topic sentence 统领段落] The world is in flux [n. 不断的变动，不停的变化They are in flux], and yet students are not encouraged to engage with the change. Instead, they are offered the chance to retreat into thought bunkers offered by parents or teachers [过去分词修饰名词], and cut themselves off [(用锋利的刀具等)去除，切除，剪去cut off the fat before frying the steak] from unsettling[adj. 令人不安的，使人担忧的] ideas about political field. In other words, students today are afraid in ways that generations before them were not, they are facing new, intricated[错综复杂的] political conflicts or hardships [困境].Politics can be disasters today. [长短结合，掷地有声] Students thus subconsciously[潜意识的] pay more attention to their own developments instead of concerning political news or trends. In the past, however, students used to read newspapers or watch programs to find information about political events or figures, fantasizing [措辞word choice，正向词来表现对政治的向往] to be a part of the political activity. [对比论证] Of the many worrying things in students’ daily existence, perhaps the most interesting and appealing of all was politics. After all, most students treat political developments as the catalyst [催化剂] of a society. [时间对比]

　　Body 2:

　　参考思路：

　　Information online à read related news on a daily basis / more accessible à awareness cultivated/deeply entrenched à various stories / can better understand politics à show more interest. 具体内容已略，详情见课堂;

　　Conclusion：

　　To sum up, the demonizing opinions lurks [v. 隐藏着;潜水Fear lurks beneath the surface.] inside students and overwhelming amount of information about politics online can explain comprehensively about their limited concern for politics today. [总结上文论点，重申观点]

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