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2014-03-14 16:48:00来源:新东方 胡中华

  托福写作机经题目:

  Young people now are more willing to help others than in the past.

  红色字表示写作中的逻辑思路

  中心句:

  First, schools now focus on responsibility education to encourage students to help others.

  理由:描写社会现状

  In such education context, students start to pay attention to other people, because schools are helping students to recognize that the world is connected to each other and no individualsis isolated, thus it is necessary to understand society as a whole, rather than many separate units. As the result, students will realize to help the group is helping themselves. This mentality will cultivate their virtue to be engaged in a community.

  例子:For example several young people recently organized a team to deal with issues concerning their own community, focusing on improving the surroundings of the neighborhood. Last month they gathered a number of residents in that area to do a ‘community cleanupprogram’. These young volunteers clean up corners that are neglected by dustmen. 总结:This program is good encouragement for people to treat the community asa whole and, it is also a very good indicator to show young people’s willingness to help others.

  和段落中心联系起来:Without a good education, such good deeds can be rarely obtained because it is not encouraged and prized in social context.

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