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托福30天备考计划第8天之写作

2014-03-21 14:13:48来源：新东方 杨睿彦

托福30天备考计划第8天之写作

　　段落示范

　　展开方法：(举例论证)主题句 + 例子 + 论证 + 扣题句

　　Pet raising is the most effective way to help children overcome habitual procrastination.

　　段落解析：（引出主题句）养宠物是帮助孩子改掉拖延症最有效的方法；

　　Most kids love animals, and so naturally they feel a strong sense of responsibility. When the pets are desperately in need of help, let’s say, they are ill, despite fatigue, children often manage to deal with it in time—they’ll rush to the vet for advice—instead of turning a blind eye. If they dare put it off, they will have to endure the pain of losing the animals. In contrast, when it comes to doing other household tasks, whether it is indoor chores such as dishwashing, dusting and vacuuming or outdoor tasks such as removing leaves from rain gutters, chances are kids will repetitiously say to themselves, “Well, let’s do it a bit later,” but end up never getting the jobs done, unless their parents are there to watch them finish the chores.

　　段落解析：（对比例子，凸显养宠物的优势）先把日常生活中熟悉的例子摆出来，后面再通过例子切入主题，进行论证。养宠物算是一种家务，所以将其和其它家务做对比。为了凸显养宠物是“最好”的，与之相比的其它家务不能只有一个，至少两个。两样东西作对比只能说是其中一个更好，而不是最好。

　　Why so? It is all about love. Emotional attachment means voluntary devotion and less procrastination. In pets’ raising, children tend to assume the responsibility out of their own will, but in other tasks forced on kids, they often do it out of fear for punishments. The real good of getting disciplined in pet raising is that the effect penetrates into other aspects of life. Believe it or not, once kids learn to feed the animals on time, they also manage to hand in their school assignments on time.

　　段落解析：（解释原因）将感情投资、拖延症和责任感的关系解释清楚并强调孩子从养宠物学会负责人之后，责任心将渗透到生活各个方面。

　　This is how raising pets magically helps children bid farewell to the bad habit of procrastinating and learn to do things on their own responsibility.

　　段落解析：用一句话概括段落的内容，强调两个关键词：”责任” 和“拖延症”

　　注：最高级题写“支持”的话，请记得将题目里的选项和“至少其它两个”选项做对比，以突显该选项“最好”，不是“更好”。

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