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托福写作范文：照顾动物

2015-01-14 17:38:29来源：网络

　　2015年托福考试已经来临，对于每一位参加托福考试的同学来说都是新的开始，那么我们对于托福听说读写都需要采取怎样的复习方法?这四项又需要注意些什么呢?我们分别谈一下。下面是新东方在线托福小编整理的托福写作范文：照顾动物，供同学们参考!

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way for parents toteach their children about responsibility is to have them care for an animal.

　　Personally I highly doubt that caring for an animal has anything to do with “responsibility”. Or atleast I hardly believe it is the “best way” for parents to do it.

　　To be responsible is to do what one has promised. Responsibility definitely are more relatedwith a rational decision before action and a strong mind of carrying out a schedule and ofkeeping every disturbance which may turn a plan involving with other people into invalidity than“caring” for a lovely small piece of creature.

　　There are way too many methods of teaching children how to be reponsible. I would prefernegative stimulus in the early education. Kids need a clear line which they could never cross.When kids are told and agree not to speak loudly in public area such a bookstore or a hospital,they should also be informed the result they would face if they broke their words. It willdefinitely set up a protocol for them to follow in their later life.

　　I also believe that telling stories of heroes to children is a better way. Stories might be a bitexaggerated or extorted, but they certainly would set up a sense of discipline, bravery andresponsibility. When I was little, my father read a story to me. It is about historians’ spirit. So inancient time, literally three thousand years ago, historian was considered a noble job.Historians’ duty was to record what was happening in the court and the job was hereditary.So the tyrant of Qi State murdered the old king and threatened the royal historians not torecord the misdeed. Otherwise he would be killed. That noble man, without hesitating, wrotedown the fact and he was slaughtered. So was his brothers and sons, who served as royalhistorians as well and who never feared of death and power. I was so inspired by these greathuman minds and learnt the best lesson so far which taught me that the meaning of life is toreach out for truth as near as you can. When I chose to major in history in college, thosestories still had placed huge impact upon my behavior and thoughts. And during the past twodecades, I never heard any silly words that told me how to “care an animal”.

　　Responsibility is about humanity. Caring an animal is such a bourgelois cliche that a certainamount of people might not feel comfortable with. I am pretty sure a more focus on humanmind is more effective in teaching kids what responsibility really is than petting a dog.

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