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托福IBT高分作文：怎样让家乡更吸引人

2015-05-18 12:14:25来源：网络

　　托福IBT高分作文：怎样让家乡更吸引人。新托福IBT考试中，作文是考生备考的重点与难点。托福IBT写作高分范文是练习托福写作的最佳素材。本文中新东方在线托福网为大家带来IBT高分作文写作思路分析及高分范文范例怎样让家乡更吸引人。希望对同学们的托福备考有所帮助。

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　　托福IBT高分作文：

　　How to make your hometown more appealing to people your age?

　　What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? Use specific reasons　and examples to support your opinion.

　　托福IBT高分作文分析：

　　改变其环境。

　　托福IBT高分作文范文：怎样让家乡更吸引人

　　My hometown is a pretty good place to live. However, I still can think of at least three changes that would　drastically increase the towns appeal to people my age, around 20. The construction of public sports facilities　would give us the opportunity to exercise and spend our time constructively, the further development of the public　parks would provide us with places to spend our leisure time in nice and cost free environments, and the lowering　of the cost of public transportation would give us the opportunity to roam the city more freely.

　　Exercising is the most popular recreational activity amongst people my age, but unfortunately there is very　little opportunity to pursue sports in my hometown. All of the gyms, basketball courts, and football fields are on　school grounds, and most of the time they are occupied by other students or sports teams. When they are not　occupied, the facilities are locked up or it is too dark to play sports. The construction of public sports facilities　that are open to anybody would solve this problem.

　　My friends and I enjoy spending time together, but we cannot find a suitable place to hang out. Most of the　time, we meet at the shopping mall around the corner, or play outside the convenience store across from school. We　usually just spent what money we have and do nothing else but look at the stores or sit on the street. We want to go　to a park or a nice green area, but most of them are not very well kept. Those that are nice are too far away.　Lowering the cost of bus and train tickets would not only allow us to go to those parks, but it would open up a　whole new realm of possibilities. We would be able to go to other parts of the city and see our relatives more often.

　　Right now, the only time we get to see our cousins is on holidays. Furthermore, we could actually afford to see a　movie in the theater. At present the cost of transportation is almost as much as the ticket itself.

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