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托福IBT高分作文：改变学校

2015-05-25 11:57:38来源：网络

　　托福IBT高分作文：改变学校。考试需要积累大量新托福写作模板，将其转化为自己的专属模板。IBT考试中，托福满分作文就是最好的写作模板。考生可以参考满分作文写法，提高自己的托福写作水平。本文中新东方在线托福网为大家带来IBT高分作文写作思路分析及高分范文范例改变学校。希望对同学们的托福备考有所帮助。

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　　托福IBT高分作文：

　　What change do you want to make in a school you attended?

　　If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make?Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

　　托福IBT高分作文范文：改变学校

　　While the school system in China is generally quite good, there is one problem that I have found prevalent　through all of my years of education. The problem is that the teacher to student ratio is too small. This situation was　of no benefit to anyone: the teachers, or the students. If there were more teachers in each school, class sizes would　be smaller, there would be a greater diversity of knowledge and information, and teachers would be less tired, and　would therefore give better classes.

　　Class sizes are overwhelmingly large in China. In many of the courses offered in elementary school and high　school, there are over forty students in a class. It is very difficult to learn in this type of situation. The teacher has no　time to spend with individual students who need extra help, and students are often embarrassed to ask questions in　front of so many other students. If class sizes could be shrunk, the learning curve in most courses would rise　dramatically.

　　With more teachers at every school, the collective mass of knowledge and information would rise. Everyone　in the world has his/her own very particular set of information. People are like snowflakes; each person is different　and has varied experiences from the next person. With more people at a school, there is a wider knowledge base to　draw from. This would obviously be an advantage to students, as schools could offer a wider range of courses in a　variety of fields of study.

　　Therefore, if I was given the opportunity to change one thing in the high school that I once attended, I would　like to try to recruit more qualified teachers and give them more decent pays. This would benefit everyone. It is an　unfortunate fact that most school districts cannot afford to make this happen.

——本文转自新东方在线论坛

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