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托福IBT高分作文：成熟的标志

2015-05-26 10:17:45来源：网络

　　托福IBT高分作文：成熟的标志。考试需要积累大量新托福写作模板，将其转化为自己的专属模板。IBT考试中，托福满分作文就是最好的写作模板。考生可以参考满分作文写法，提高自己的托福写作水平。本文中新东方在线托福网为大家带来IBT高分作文写作思路分析及高分范文范例成熟的标志。希望对同学们的托福备考有所帮助。

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　　托福IBT高分作文：

　　What events make a person an adult?

　　People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies)　make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

　　托福IBT高分作文分析：

　　Difference between children and adults: 成熟(mature);独立(independent);独立思考(critical thinking);解决问题(problem solving);自我责任(self-responsible)……; Event: 毕业典礼、18岁生日……

　　托福IBT高分作文范文：成熟的标志

　　People have many different ways expressing, celebrating and legislating our passage from childhood into　adulthood. I believe that there is no single moment that defines when a child becomes an adult. Becoming an adult is　based on a variety of events, namely, when one's body changes, when one's mind expands, and when one　accumulates experiences.

　　Small children are usually referred to as cherub like. They are all beautiful with rosy cheeks, bright eyes, and　tender skin. As a child grows into an adolescent, they grow taller, but their frames remain quite small. Once a　youth grows from an adolescent to an adult, frames develop substantially. Their shoulders broaden and they are　able to form defined muscles. This physical change is the most obvious sign of a child becoming an adult.

　　The second modification that occurs is the expansion of one's mind. When one is an adult, they are able to　comprehend much more advanced thought processes. They start to be able to think for themselves, and make　decisions that are best for them. Children are not capable of making complex decisions regarding their lives or　their future. They do not have a mind capable of carefully weighing all of the options and deducing the right　choice.

　　This expansion of the mind is a result of the numerous experience a person has on his/her way to becoming　an adult. As one moves through the world, they gather important information about how the world works. This　information becomes one's personal database of knowledge: such a database is absolutely necessary if one is to　grow past childhood. The experiences of which I speak are the happenings in our day-to-day lives. We are　constantly placed in situations where we must choose one path or another. Of course, one will make mistakes along　the way. These mistakes are an important learning tool, which help us become wise adults.

　　In conclusion, children become adults when they have sufficiently matured. Their bodies, their minds, and the　number of experiences they have had must grow. Once this process is complete, they can rightfully claim to be　adults.

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