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ETS官方托福作文满分范文：手工还是机器化操作(2篇)

2015-06-08 11:37:33来源：网络

　　【ETS官方托福作文满分范文：手工还是机器化操作】新东方在线托福网为大家带来ETS官方托福作文满分范文：手工还是机器化操作，希望对大家托福备考有所帮助。更多精彩尽请关注新东方在线托福网!

　　托福写作满分范文题目：

　　Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　托福写作满分作文范文：Topic:101

　　Here's the problem. I'm sloppy. That's why I like to use machines to do my work rather than do　things by hand. Machines can be creative, precise, and efficient.

　　Most people think that you can only be creative if you do things by hand. However, it takes　creativity to set the machine up. Once it's set up, it can repeat the same task over and over and　over perfectly. If you want to write ten letters, you can set up your word processor to do it, press

　　a button, and ten letters will be printed. It would take me forever by hand, and I would make a lot　of mistakes. By hand, each letter would be different. By machine, each one is perfect.

　　Machines are very precise. They don't get tired and cut the wrong way. They don't get distracted　and drop some mustard on the paper. As I said, I'm sloppy, but I like neatness. That's why I prefer　to use machines.

　　Machines are also more efficient. I'm too tired to pick up the phone and see who is calling me. My　answering machine isn't tired. It's always on duty. It doesn't get tired, upset, or moody.　I can depend on my machines, but I can't always depend on my hand to be creative, precise, or　efficient.

　　托福写作满分作文范文：Topic:101

　　In general, there are two ways of making products, one is by hand and the other is by machine. It　is undeniable that products can be manufactured easily and efficiently by machine due to simply　repeated operations. But for me, I prefer hand-made items for their features of individualism,　acceptability, and flexibility.

　　First of all, hand-made products are more personal. Take birthday cards as example, instead same　pictures on selling cards in the market, the well-chosen images on a self-made cards, such as　people’s own photos, surely distinguish the card from those selling ones. Owing to the uniqueness,　the self-designed card will be of greater value for the person who receives it.

　　What’s more, things made by hand are fitter and more suitable. This can be seen from the story of　ordering formal clothes, such as men’s suit and lady’s evening dress, the ready-made kinds of　which actually are easy to find in fashion shops. Needless to say how often famous figures, like　Princess Diana, visit worldwide known fashion designers. Nowadays more and more ordinary　people go for tailor-made clothing rather than buy those machine-made clothes from market　simply because tailors can make clothing precisely according to customer’s measurement and　their own styles. Obviously, fitness and suitability are what those people care about most.

　　Finally, producing items by hand is more flexible. It releases people from being confined by some　models that are necessary for machine-made manufacturing. For example, in hand-made pottery　making, people can work out their new design at any time. In machine-made manufacturing,　however, models have to be developed in advance, and afterward all finished products based on　one model have completely same looks. If a different look needed, people must devise another　model first. Moreover, there are still some things cannot be produced by machine because of no　matched models.


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