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ETS官方托福作文满分范文：对年轻人的影响力(2篇)

2015-06-10 10:57:43来源：网络

　　【ETS官方托福作文满分范文：对年轻人的影响力】新东方在线托福网为大家带来ETS官方托福作文满分范文：对年轻人的影响力_，希望对大家托福备考有所帮助。更多精彩尽请关注新东方在线托福网!

　　托福写作满分范文题目：对年轻人的影响力

　　Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other　people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you　agree with? Use examples to support your position.

　　托福写作满分作文范文：Topic:114

　　Although friends make an impression on your life, they do not have the same influence that your　　family has. Nothing is as important to me as my family. From them, I learned everything that is　important. I learned about trust, ambition, and love.

　　Your family is with you forever. They are not going to leave you because they find another　daughter they like better. They are not going to leave you because they think you are too much　trouble. A family is permanent, while friends come and go.

　　Your parents are your role models. They will encourage you to do your best, to push yourself, and　to improve yourself. Friends want you to stay the same; they don't want you to be different. A　family is ambitious for you. Friends are not.

　　Your family teaches you about love. A family's love is not judgmental. They love you for　everything you are. Friends may love you because you have a new car or because you go out with　them on Saturdays. A family loves you. Friends only like you.

　　Without my family, I wouldn't know what to do. I wouldn't feel as secure. I might not have the　ambition to go to school. I probably would be afraid to love. My family is my greatest influence.

　　托福写作满分作文范文：Topic:114

　　It is true that both of the family and friends play important roles in influencing young adults, and it　is really hard for us to tell which is the most important influence.

　　In my opinion, the family plays the most important role. When a young child is born, he is brought　up by the family not by his friends, and a child has the keener sense in learning than a older one. I　think the family can mold the child in the following ways.

　　Firstly, the family is the first school a child should enter.There he learns and is taught how to　learn.It is safe to say that the character of a person is determined in his childhood, and when it is　the family which to make the determination.

　　Secondly, a good family will afford good education for the child. Now more and more Chinese　family realize the importance of education,some even make thire children study in foreign　countries.All this is unchoosable for the child,that is, the family has the undeniable influence on　the young adult.

　　Thirdly, when the child is in his young adult, the family still plays a important influence on him.　　For instance, I always feel the expectation of my parents and struggle to favor them. Which is a　hard work, but I still think it is naturally that I, as a son, should meet the expectation of them.　Thus, the family is really a strong influence on the young.

　　I make the family the important influence doesn't deny that the role of friends on the young　adults. Only that friends' role is not as important as the family.



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