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　　托福写作满分范文题目：你想发明什么

　　If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to　explain why this invention is needed.

　　托福写作满分作文范文：Topic:132

　　If I could invent something new, I'd invent a device or pill that could put people to sleep　immediately and would have no side effects. The proper amount of sleep is important for our　concentration, mental health, and physical health.

　　Getting enough sleep is a vital human need. For one thing, without sleep our concentration is　strongly affected. We're easily distracted, we can't remember things, and we don't notice what's　happening around us. For example, a lot of car accidents are caused by tired drivers. When we get　enough sleep, our powers of concentration are sharper. We're more focused on what we're doing.We perform better.

　　Mental health is also affected by lack of sleep. It's easy to tell if people don't get enough sleep.　　They're on edge, cranky, and out of sorts. They lose their tempers easily and over-react to　　situations. In fact, experiments have shown that lack of sleep over a long period of time can cause　　a complete mental breakdown. When we get our proper rest, we're more alert and responsive. Ouroutlook is positive, and we're much easier to get along with.

　　Our physical health shows the strain of sleeplessness, too. We have less energy, and everything　seems like a major effort. Over a long period of time, we become slow and unresponsive. Thewear and tear on the body from lack of sleep can be a very serious health problem. Every doctor　will tell you that getting enough sleep is a basic factor in maintaining good health.

　　Wouldn't it be great to go to bed every night knowing you 'd have no problem getting to sleep, no　matter what's going on in your life? Getting enough sleep is always going to be an important pan　of how you respond to your situation. I think this device would be very helpful to all of us.

　　托福写作满分作文范文：Topic:132

　　People will normally invent something that they want very much in the real life if they have the　ability . As a father of a two-year-old boy, I would make a baby sitter robot. The reasons are as　follows.

　　In the first place, a baby-sitter robot can take care of my baby when I go to work. There will be a　dilemma in front of parents when they have a child, who should stay at home and who should　continue to work, mother or father? With a baby-sitter robot, they do not need to make a choice.　Parents will no longer give up their jobs because of their child.

　　In the second place, a baby-sitter robot can make my baby stay away from danger. A person　cannot concentrate on one thing 24 hours a day. It will be dangerous when he/she is taking care of　　a baby. A baby is so unpredictable that you never know what he/she will do in the next minute.　For instance, the baby may swallow a coin or fall to the ground from the bed when you just do not　look at him/her for a second. However, a robot does not have such a problem because she is never　tired. She can keep an eye on the baby all the time. Any potential dangerous action will be　prevented. Even when the baby is sleeping, the robot can still watch the baby if you want. In　addition, a baby-sitter robot can entertain the baby. Songs and stories can be inputted in the　robot's memory and replayed whenever the baby needs them. It is so easy to change them that the　baby will never be bored on one song or story.

　　In conclusion, I would like to invent a baby-sitter robot not only because it can take care of my　baby for me, but also because it can make my baby safe and happy.