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独立写作能拿good却总拿不到高的分数,如果综合写作没有问题的话,那么就是独立写作的问题喽。为什么会拿到good却还拿不到高分呢。问题很可能就出现在语言上了。很多同学思路没问题,因此在考场的时候能够随意的写出400以上的文章。但是语言却以简单句为主,穿插一些比较恶俗的从句(指的是:不从表达需要出发,强行秀语法的)。因此魔君特意今天写出这篇文章,告诉广大同学们!除了简单句并列句复合句这些常规性武器以外,我们也适当时候需要往自己的武器库中装备一些重型武器了哦,今天我们一起来看看重型武器之一:倒装!看的同时,请同学们自己跟着魔君一起练习哦!
完全倒装全部谓语+主语
1. here, there, now, then等副词引导的句子,通常称作把时间状语,地点状语提前的倒装句,其谓语动词通常跟在时间or地点状语之后.
A controversy whether starting school day early is a better choice appears then.
变成:
Then appears a controversy whether starting school day early is a better choice.
In the urban cities, an increasing number of ambitious youngsters who attempt to earn a better living live there.
变成:
In the urban cities, there live an increasing number of ambitious youngsters who attempt to earn a better living.
2. 为了使描述的景象更生动,常把拟声词或away, in, out, up, down等状语放在句首,从而引起主谓全部倒装。
Down it fell from the apple tree.
The door opened, in rush the crowed.
Up went the arrow
总结1,2: here, there/now, then/in, out/up, down/ away + 谓语动词 + 主语
3. 句首状语是表示 地点 的 介词词组 时,也完全倒装: 地点状语+谓语+主语
很多工厂位于都市。
Many factories lie in urban cities.
变成
In urban cities lie many factories.
越来越多的学生在美国学习,为了更先进的教育体系和多元文化。
Students in a growing number study in America, for advanced educational system and diversified culture.
变成
In America study students in a growing number, for advanced educational system and diversified culture.
更多的市民选择住在在他们老了以后住小城市。
More citizens choose to live in a small town when they grow older.
变成:
In a small town choose to live more citizens, when they grow older.
更多的年轻人选待在家里放松。
Many more young people stay at home for relaxation.
变成:
At home stay many young people for relaxation.
4. 表语 放在句首,倒装结构采用:“表语+ 系动词 + 主语”
1)形容词+系动词+主语:
大学生很担忧他们未来的职业发展,使他们找各种兼职工作希望去尽可能多的培养技能。
College students are anxious about their future career development, leading them to take various different part-time jobs with the hoping to cultivate techniques as many as possible.
变为:
Anxious about their future career development are college students, leading them to take various different part-time jobs with the hoping to cultivate techniques as many as possible.
2)现在/过去分词+系动词+主语:
中国正发生巨大的变化。
The dramatic change is taking place in China.
变成:
Taking place in China is the dramatic change.
7-12岁的小孩上不了小学的现象已经一去不复返了。
The phenomena that many kids aging from 7 to 12 years old cannot attend primary schools are gone.
变成:
Gone are the phenomena that many kids aging from 7 to 12 years old cannot attend primary schools.
发展中和发达国家都遭受了前所未有的经济危机。
Both developing and developed countries are confronted with an unprecedented economic crisis.
变成:
Confronted with an unprecedented economic crisis are both developing and developed countries.
目前学校基础设施的质量正在经历巨大的提升。
The quality of infrastructure facilities in current schools is experiencing a huge improvement
变成: Experiencing a huge improvement is the quality of infrastructure facilities in current universities.
日渐衰败的传统企业处于激烈的竞争市场中
Traditional enterprises of gradual dilapidation is involved in the market of fierce competition
变成:Involved in the market of fierce competition is traditional enterprises of gradual dilapidation.
3)介词 + 系动词 + 主语:
由睡眠不足引起的劳累和注意力不集中是导致交通事故的主要因素。
The fatigue and distraction caused by inadequate sleep are among the main contributors to traffic accidents.
变成:Among the main contributors to traffic accidents are the fatigue and distraction caused by inadequate sleep.
提升教师的工资是提升教学效率最重要的因素的之一。
Increasing teachers’ salaries is one of the most indispensable methods to facilitate the improvement of teaching efficiency.
变成: Among the most indispensable methods to facilitate the improvement of teaching efficiency is increasing teachers’ salaries.
部分倒装: 助动词/be动词/情态动词放在主语前
1)形容词/名词/动词 + as/though引导的让步状语从句。
尽管科技发展带来了好处,它也对环境造成了巨大伤害。
Though the advancement of technology generates benefits, it also takes a massive toll on the environment.
Benefits though the advancement of technology generates, it also takes a heavy massive toll on the environment.
尽管住在小城市能够享受优美的环境,但是这也会限制年轻人的职业发展。
Though living in a small town can lead to a beautiful environment, it also restricts career development of young people.
A beautiful environment though living in a small town can lead to, it also restricts career development of young people.
尽管创办一个企业所带来的好处是很大的,但是我们也不能忽视为其他公司工作所能带来的好处.
Though the advantages that initiating a business will result in are considerable, we should not ignore that working for others has some minor benefits.
Considerable though the advantages that initiating a business will result in are, they cannot compete with the benefits that working for others brings about.
尽管让孩子养宠物很重要,但是我们也不能低估其他培养孩子责任感方式的重要性。
Though enabling children to keep a pet is veryimportant, we can never underestimate the significance of other methods to cultivate children's sense of responsibility.
Important though allowing children to raise a pet is, the significance of other methods to cultivate children's sense of responsibility can never be downplayed.
尽管以上的论述看起来很有道理, 但是接下来的论述将会揭示以上的论述是多么没有道理。
Though the above-mentioned statement seems to be plausible, the following explanation will demonstrate how flimsy it is.
Plausible though the above-mentioned statement seems to be, the subsequent explanation will prove how untenable it is.
2).No\not\never \neither\nor\seldom\rarely\barely\scarcely\hardly 表否定的副词或短语+助动词+主语+谓语+其他成分
人们绝不可能成功如果他们没有艰辛的努力。
People can hardly achieve a success without arduous and persistent efforts.
Hardly can people achieve a success without arduous and persistent endeavor.
如果国家的经济和科技不发展人们的生活水平就无法提高。
People's living standards can never be boosted when the development of national economy and technology stagnates.
Never can people's living standard be boosted when the development of national economy and technology keeps still.
由于在大城市中繁重的工作压力,人们很少能够有时间参加户外活动。
People can seldom partake in outdoor activities owing to the heavy pressure from their work in the big city.
Seldom can people partake in outdoor activities due to the heavy pressure from their daily work in the big city.
3). Only+状语置于句首+助动词+主语+谓语+其他
只有当人们满18岁,才能进酒吧
Only when people are more than 18 years ago can they be permitted to go to bar.
只有当大学生将学到的理论知识应用到实践,才能找到一份理想的工作。
Only when college students can put theories into practice can they find a decent job in the future.
4). So… that… 的倒装
魔君如此多才多艺以至于如此迷人
Mo Jun is so versatile than he is miraculously charming.
So versatile is Mo Jun that he is miraculously charming.
社会发展如此之快以至于忽略了对于环境造成的伤害
Social progress is so fast that the environmental damage has been overlooked.
So fast is social progress that the environmental damage has been overlooked.
电视节目种类如此之多,以至于学生们投入了大量时间投入看电视节目,忽略了学习的重要性。
The range of TV programs is so wide that students spend a large amount of time watching TV, thereby ignoring the importance of study.
So wide is the range of TV programs that students spend a large amount of time watching TV, thereby ignoring the importance of study.
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