托福写作介绍：独立写作的逻辑性

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　　大家都知道一篇作文是否具有逻辑性是很重要的，接下来看看怎么才能确定你的文章是否是有逻辑性呢?

　　独立写作中的逻辑性

　　一篇托福独立写作，怎样就算有逻辑了呢?只要看一看：

　　1.在开头段，我们有没有标明我们的立场?如果采取的不是开门见山的方式，引出我们的立场的垫话与我们要讨论的问题是不是直接相关?

　　2.在中间的论述段，我们有没有在段首写出概括句，言明我们的分论点(supporting ideas) ?分论点是否是针对题目给出的论题(thesis statement)的讨论?分论点能否支撑我们的立场?言明分论点后需要进行大段的论述，我们的论述是否有力地支撑了我们的分论点?我们的论述是否是就一个主题即分论点的讨论，内部是否协调统一非前言不搭后语?

　　3.在结尾段，我们有没有总结论述段的分论点，重申我们的立场?

　　在前面这几期和今天说的确定是否具有逻辑性之后，我们来具体看一个TPO的真题来感受一下：

　　Question:

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.

　　Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　Step1 确定题目类型： “……than……”——比较选择类

　　Step2 抓住 绝对词与细节词signal words ：than more

　　确定比较关系 students’ teacher and students’ friends

　　Step3 抓住争论焦点：

　　Agree：Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.

　　Disagree： Students are more influenced by their friends than by their teacher.(此处注意，争论焦点是比较谁比谁more influenced 而不是说哪一方没有影响)

　　Step 4 不断提及限定条件：

　　More influenced

　　最后给大家观赏一篇范围，虽然没有很多高大上的词汇， 但是逻辑很清晰，结构统一，对于不敢下笔的同学们刚开始能写这样就很不错了。

　　sample：

　　1.All of us are surrounded by different kinds of people every day. For students, when they are at school, they are mainly surrounded by teachers and their friends. Both of these two kinds of people have great influence on students. However, I still believe that friends have greater influence on students than teachers do.

　　2. Usually a student and his friends are almost at the same age, or at least they have similar ages. Therefore, they will have a lot of in common, such as hobbies. As a consequence, they can talk to each other and imitate each other’s behavior easily. My little brother and his friends are both interested in soccer games and they spent almost all their spare time talking about soccer games worldwide and great football players. What’s more, my brother’s friend is a good soccer player and my brother tends to imitate his behavior. As a result, my chubby brother becomes better at doing sports, especially playing soccer. Meanwhile, a teacher won’t have such great influence on a student since teachers have less in common with students.

　　3.Moreover, in most schools in my country, the teachers just appear in front of the students when there is a class and they will leave the classroom as soon as the class in over. Thus, the students actually have limited time to communicate with their teachers. Even if they do have some time to discuss with their teachers, the topic of the discussion is usually the subject in class. However, a student could have hundreds of different topic, ranging from daily lives or school subjects, to talk with their friends. They have more time communicating and therefore, they know and understand each other better than their teachers. As for me, I can spend a whole day talking to my best friends but only an hour talking with my teachers.

　　4.In addition, an everlasting friend may have greater influence in the long run than a teacher. Some of our friends at school may become friends forever. This kind of friend will influence us even when we graduate. However, teachers, on the contrary seldom become everlasting during our lives. They won’t have as great influence in the long run as our friends do.

　　5.All in all, though I have to admit that teachers and friends both have great influence on students, I still believe that students are more affected by their friends. The more people have in common with you, the greater influence they will have on you. Therefore, a friend, who is the most similar to students, is the greatest influence during a student’s life.

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