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托福写作独辟蹊径也能拿到高分

2018-06-06 15:31:53来源:新东方

  托福写作一般都是持一方观点进行论述,但是有时候我们是否也可以采取中立的观点呢?如何能够让你的作文独辟蹊径,也能够拿到高分呢?下面来看看这位老师为大家进行的讲解吧!

  来源:新东方 李涛

  托福独立写作大部分的题目都是两种情况的对比,一般要求学生在A和B之间任选其一。比如to wear school uniforms to school or not, 再比如to work for a big company or a smaller one. 有一天我突然脑子中蹦出这么一个问题:

  如果我保持中立可以吗?我保持中立可以吗?

  让我们继续研究。托福官方指南第四版上面有这么一个题目It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends?

  你觉得老朋友重要还是新朋友重要。猛地一看,老朋友和新朋友都很重要啊,老朋友更懂我而新朋友可以开拓我的视野啊。非要选一个出来嘛

  让我们来看一看官方指南上藏在角落里的一句话:If you believe that old and new friends are equally important, you should present a balanced argument that explains the benefits of both types of friends.

  所以答案是大写的可以。再比如2017.4.15这个题目(选择这个题目的原因有两个,一来这个题目很有代表性,二来这个日子是老师我的生日)It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.

  幽默的朋友…

  还是聪明的朋友…

  就不能选择老师这种both聪明and 幽默的朋友嘛?

  让我们来看看这里面的相关单词和短语:

  underachiever 后进生

  dilemma 困境

  tedious 无聊的

  sagacious 睿智的

  articulate 详述

  empathically 移情作用地

  admonish 训诫,劝告

  run across 遭遇

  grass root 草根

  racks one’s brains 绞尽脑汁

  be a snap 易如反掌

  范文时间

  下面就根据老师给出的范文来看看,好的文章是怎么来组织语言和逻辑结构的吧!

  It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.

  On one hand, friends with high intelligence can help me in both academic areas and daily life.这句是topic sentence需要出现在body paragraph的开头。

  We would definitely run across either some difficult questions in studies no matter I am a student with honor or an underachiever or some dilemmas in the tedious life no matter I am a governmental official or just belong to the grass roots. In these cases, intelligent pals will help me to get things through with their sagacious minds.这句是reasoning主要的目的是为了解释上面的topic sentence

  A chemistry problem, which probably racks my brains for three days, may turn out to be a snap for them. Not only do they tell me the correct option, but also articulate me the specific steps.用第一个example来说明自己在academic方面受到聪明朋友的帮忙

  In everyday life, my wise friends may tell me how to avoid the potential bullies by asking for help from either parents or teachers, or how to deal with a rapist by either asking them to stand in my shoes empathically or admonishing them with the severe punishment and daunting consequences.用第二个example来说明自己在daily life方面受到聪明朋友的帮忙

  Anyway, intelligent friends can ‘save’ my life literally or figuratively.最后总结,前后呼应

  之前也给大家分析了,我们可以用equal的方式去展开文章,那么文章后半部分描述朋友幽默很重要的帕也可以比照上面的段落结构完成。

  以上就是为大家整理的“托福写作独辟蹊径也能拿到高分”,更多精彩内容请关注新东方在线托福频道!


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