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托福写作九大错误开头方式

2014-11-28 19:23:06来源：网络

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。

　　3、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—观点模糊态度暧昧

　　典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　4、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—偏离主题无轨电车

　　典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。

　　5、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—语法错误惨不忍睹

　　典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。

　　6、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—过分简单没有重点

　　典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

　　“害死人”托福写作开头之七：用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

　　

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