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2016-04-06 12:05:40来源:新东方 蒋文菁

  • 来道例题:

  If a foreign friend of yours is visitingyour city. Which part of town would you recommend him or her to see? And why?

  • 传统答案:

  If a foreign friend isvisiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden becauseof the following reasons. First, there are manycharming buildings. Some of them were even designed and built like a 100 yearsago. Second, there are manylocal restaurants around and my friend can taste different kinds of deliciousfood. Last but not least, theplace in the center of my town and the transportation to get there is very convenient. To sum up, If a foreignfriend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden

  • 为什么这个答案得不了高分?看下面:

  - 开头重复原题的句子是一个安全但是比较被动的做法。学霸的答案是要体现出主动而自然的表达;

  - 中间的三个理由貌似比较充分但实际上每个理由都存在扩展不充分的问题,结果变成了理由的罗列。学霸的答案重点不是在理由的数量(很多题目在15秒职能想到一个理由),而是在理由的细节扩展上;

  - 结尾的总结貌似让整个答案更加完整,但实际上只是对主题句的完全重复,没有任何意义上的功能。学霸的答案一般会把宝贵的时间花在陈述真正有意义的内容上,即使是总结也需要用更多样化的语言;

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