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十天搞定托福作文:正文如何布局

2016-04-12 11:05:34来源:网络

  细节论述部分:

  1、个人事例推广到一般:(图书馆有钱该买书还是买电脑)

  During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are required to resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.

  However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes a whole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Ever since the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, we are free to refer to the same article at the same time through different terminals.

  This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many readers of the library need to refer to the same source at the sametime.

  2、反例:(still 图书馆)

  Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a good book lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are not safe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.

  解说:不好说电脑好存放的时候,就说书不好存放。

  举反例要适可而止,不能指望全篇用反例来支撑自己的观点。

  3、具体数据和引用权威:

  想得4分以上必须注意, 因为4分要求说服力,5分要求appropriateexamples。

  Eg.My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from the government.

  Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.

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