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新东方名师解析：托福写作高分是怎么来的

2016-05-19 14:31:03来源：新东方 周徐敏

　　写出英文的话就是：

　　The food advertisement is misleading.

　　The advertisement of KFC will be designed to be much more alluring, winning the youths’ favor to purchase hamburgers and french fries.

　　这时候有的同学可能会觉得第二个更好，因为至少看起来字数会更多。但实际上确实第一种更好。你会发现当选择第二种论点的时候，接下来的段落展开只能够围绕着肯德基去展开了，你会发现对于肯德基你只知道有限的几种食品。 而如果选择第一种的话，在具体进行论证的时候我们就会有很多种选择了，例如可以选择肯德基，麦当劳，汉堡王等等。而且这样的展开过程也能够体现出逻辑的层次性，由总到分。

　　4　Coherence：连贯性

　　Sample. Agree or disagree: it is often not good to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose touch with old friends.

　　1.审题：浏览题干，判断题型-题干中含有因果关系，找因果的漏洞; 根据题型，决定思路-因：搬到新城市失去老朋友，原因不成立; 果：搬到新城市不好， 结果不成立， 因此选择不同意的思路展开;论点设置：一个反驳原因，一个反驳结果

　　托福写作独立任务题审完题后，快速卸除文章结构：开头段+论点1+论点2+ 让步段+结尾段

　　As the technology of public transportation keeps advancing, more citizens can choose to dwell in the cities that are beneficial to their own development. Inevitably, then occurs a controversy whether moving to a new city or country will lead to the rupture of relationship among friends. From my perspective, I think the statement is not sensible.

　　Firstly, moving to a new country or city will not result in the loss of old friends.

　　Moreover, instead of losing old friends, city migrants can even enlarge their social circles and achieve more success.

　　Admittedly, it can be understandable that friends can be estranged as a consequence of the long distance.Specifically speaking, the chances to meet with each other will be limited a lot. However, for one thing, people can talk with each other through various social network software. For another thing, the distance between cities is not a problem anymore since there have been many public transportation tools like the high-speed trains and airplanes that will lead us to anyplace we try to go in a very short period.

　　In a word, moving to a new city or a new country is good choice under some circumstance. Besides, the highly developed technology can help to strengthen the relations with our friends and the possibilities of living a different life and achieving success can both explain why I stand by the statement that it is a good thing to move to a new city.

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