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托福写作病句的改进

2020-06-30 16:26:00来源：网络

　　为了帮助大家高效备考托福，新东方在线托福频道为大家带来托福写作病句的改进，希望对大家托福备考有所帮助。更多精彩尽请关注新东方在线托福频道!

　　1. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

　　3.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　8. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.

　　12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　13. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　14. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　20. I felt alone.

　　21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　23. What’s about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　24. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

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