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托福写作步骤及正反观点范文评分

2016-05-17 15:34:40来源:网络

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  托福独立写作Independent Writing评分标准介绍

  一、写作步骤

  列提纲

  1. make an option(能找到最多素材的观点)

  2. 3 reasons(例如选择结伴同行的理由是safer, more fun, easier to travel)

  3. specific examples for each reason

  把内容扩展之后套入模板

  评分标准:0-5

  1. development内容上言之有理

  2. organization好的模板很重要

  3. language use 词汇丰富性、语法正确性等等

  sample structure

  第一段:Point of view 摆观点

  第二、三、四段:Supporting points=3 reasons, examples and details to support your points

  第五段:Conclusion 结论(同义替换第一段)

  二、范例

  题目:Some people say rich countries should help poor countries, while others disagree. What do you say? Please give details and examples to support your opinion.

  托福写作范文:持反方意见的范文

  In my opinion, rich countries should not help poor countries for two reasons. Firstly, it will be of no significant change for rich countries to help poor countries if the donation is withdrawn. On the other hand, poor countries will be put into difficult conditions if they are dependent on the support from rich countries. Secondly, it might be risky for rich countries to help evil poor countries, especially those in potential threat to world peace.

  Despite the humanity for which the rich should give a hand to the poor, poor countries should make every effort to become rich. Otherwise, they will remain poor if all the extra resources from rich countries such as charity fund, technology, technicians are suspended. That’s why I agree with the Chinese saying that it had better teach a cat how to fish instead of giving it fish. For this reason, I hold the notion that rich countries should not help poor countries by donation because it does not make any major change for poor countries if they stop striving to make a better life for themselves.

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