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托福综合写作优秀作文练习题:你所不知道的巨屋

2015-04-03 15:46:33来源:网络

  托福综合写作听力观点:

  在听力部分,我们可以预测到的就是这三个理论都不成立,那么究竟是什么原因不成立呢?我们来听听:

  Unfortunately none of the arguments aboutwhat the Chaco great houses were used for is convincing.

  很遗憾,关于查科峡谷巨屋用途的三个理论,都不具有说服力。

  First, sure, from the outside, the greathouses look like later and Native American apartment buildings. But the insideof the great houses casts serious doubt on the idea that many people lived there.I’ll explain. If hundreds of people were living in the great houses, then therewould have to be many fireplaces, where each family did its daily cooking, butthere are very few fireplaces. In one of the largest great houses, there werefireplaces for only around ten families. Yet there were enough rooms in thegreat house for more than a hundred families, so the primary function of the housescouldn’t have been residential.

  首先,当然从外部卡莱,这些巨屋同之后出现的美洲土著居住建筑很相似。但是巨屋的内部构造却反驳着居住说观点。我来解释一下。如果真有数百人居住与此,那么一定有很多灶火坑以便每家都可以用来做饭。但事实上巨屋里只有很少很少的灶火坑。在其中最大的一个巨屋里,存在的灶火坑只够十家人使用。然而,存在的空间却可以供一百家人居住。所以,巨屋的主要功能不可能是居住。

  Second, the idea that the great houses wereused to store grain maize is unsupported by evidence. It may sound plausiblethat large empty rooms were used for storage, but excavations of the great houseshave not uncovered manytraces of maize or maize containers. If the great houseswere used for storage, why isn’t there more spilled maize on the floor? Whyaren’t there more remains of big containers?

  第二,证据也不支持巨屋用来储存玉米的说法。巨大的空屋子用来储存物品,这样的说法听起来挺合理的。但是对巨屋挖掘后却没有发现太多的玉米以及容器的痕迹。如果巨屋真的是用来储存的,为什么没有在地上发现更多的散落的玉米呢?为什么没有更多大号容器的痕迹呢?

  Third, the idea that the great houses wereceremonial centers isn’t well supported either. You know that mound at PuebloAlto? It contains lots of other materials besides broken pots, stuff you wouldn’texpect from ceremonies. For example, there are large quantities of buildingmaterials, sands, stones, even construction tools. This suggests that the moundis just a trash heap of construction material, stuff that was thrown away ornot used up when a house was being built. The pots in the pile could be regulartrash too, leftover from the meals of the construction workers. So the PuebloAlto mound is not good evidence that the great houses were used for special ceremonies.

  第三,祭祀中心的说法同样也站不住脚。大家知道阿尔托村庄吗?在那里,除了破碎罐子之外还有很多发现,这这些东西是不会出现在祭祀中的。比如,有很多建筑材料、沙子、石头还有建筑工具。这说明这个山包知识一个建筑材料垃圾堆,都是一些用后抛弃或者在建筑过程中没有用完的材料。这些罐子也是属于垃圾,是建筑工人吃饭的容器。所以,阿尔托村庄的这个山包不能作为证据支持祭祀说。

  托福综合写作听力笔记:

  Main point: none, convincing

  Sub point one: fireplaces, ten families, ahundred families

  Sub point two: not, maize, containers

  Sub point three: would not for ceremonies,trash, meals

  本篇范文可以借鉴的模板

  The author of the reading passage proposesthree theories as likely explanations of__________.

  The lecturer, however, points to theinaccuracies in each of these theories.

  The lecturer argues that_________________.The reading, however, ____________ in support of

  the__________ theory.

  The second theory, that ________________,is also rejected by the lecturer. He explains that

  ___________________. This proves that the“________ theory” is unlikely.

  Finally, regarding the third theory, the“_______ theory”, the lecturer contends that__________.

  He argues that___________________.


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