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托福综合写作优秀作文练习题：团队项目优势

2015-04-03 16:09:46来源：网络

　　托福综合写作笔记：

　　需要注意的标志词：

　　Another, on the other hand, because, andthen there was another occasion 在听力部分，because后面的话可就变得重要了。

　　笔记上的重点词：

　　记笔记是一定要的，因为考的是精听，细节记不下来就会失分。但是不要记句子，而是记单词。就这篇文章来讲，你的笔记上需要出现以下词：

　　-didn’t contribute, benefit, no names were named, opposite of readingprediction

　　-didn’t move very quickly, long to consensus, many meetings

　　-influential, never work – dropped, high creative – warn, direction notwork – ignore, fail, blame on all members.

　　在实际记笔记的过程中，你可以选择自己特有的简写方法，那么你的笔记将会更加简洁。听的时候不要因为一个两个词的纠结影响大片信息的提取。

　　托福综合写作阅读文章结构：

　　第一段：要表达的内容有：passage部分的主观点，lecture 部分的主观点，以及两者之间的关系。

　　第二段：passage部分的sub point 1，lecture部分对应的sub point，lecture里面相对应的support和details。

　　第三段：passage部分的sub point 2，lecture部分对应的sub point，lecture里面相对应的support和details。

　　第四段：passage部分的sub point 3，lecture部分对应的sub point，lecture里面相对应的support和details。

　　TIP：没有必要在文章中出现passage部分的support和details，或者说不能出现。

　　托福综合写作范文(仅供参考)：

　　The lecturer talks about research conductedby a firm that used the group system to handle their work. He says that thetheory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate whencompared to what happened in reality.

　　First, some members got free rides. Thatis, some didn’t work hard but got recognition for the success nonetheless. Thisalso indicates that people who worked hard were not given recognition theyshould have gotten. In other words, they weren’t given the opportunity to“shine”. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.

　　Second, groups were slow in progress. Thepassage says that groups are more responsive than individuals because of thenumber of people involved and their aggregated resources. However, the speakertalks about how the firm found out that groups were slower than individuals in decisionmaking. Groups needed more time for meetings, which are necessary procedures indecision making. This was another place where experience contradictedtheory.

　　Third, influential people might emerge andlead the group towards glory or failure. If the influent people are going inthe right direction there would be no problem. But in cases where they go in thewrong direction, there is nobody that has enough influence to counter thedecision made. In other words, the group might turn into a dictatorship, withthe influential party as the leader, and might become less flexible in itsthinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed. ratingannotation：

　　Once you can read past what seem to be theresults of poor typing, this Benchmark 5 does an excellent job of presentingthe points about the contribution and recognition of group members as well asabout speed of group decisions. The final paragraph contains one noticeableerror (“influent”), which is then used correctly two sentences later(“influential”). Overall, this is a successful response and scored within(though perhaps not at the top of) the 5 level.


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