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托福写作范文:单一职业选择前是否应该尝试多元职业

2016-02-16 15:40:29来源:新东方 薛鹏

  【托福写作范文赏析

  【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite jobs. However,it often happens that people fall into a dilemma when faced with job selection. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in support of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essay.

  【解析】

  1. One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite jobs. 现代职业选择的特征之一就是:人们在选择心仪的工作的时候,享有更多的自由。

  2. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in support of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essay. 有人认为单一职业选择前应该体验多元职业,我完全认同上面的观点,我将通过如下的文章努力证实我的立场。

  【二段】第一次支持单一职业前要从事多元职业:

  The most glaring benefit of taking up a rich variety of employments is that one could find out what his or her interest really lies in and tap his or her infinite potentials by means of embarking on manifold jobs. In other words, to secure new jobs indicates one needs to constantly face up to the new career challenges, in this sense, job-transition provides job-seekers with manifold precious chances of self-improvement. Meanwhile, Job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant sense of refreshment.

  【解析】

  1. The most glaring benefit of …… is that …… ……的最明显的利好在于……

  2. Job-transition provides job-seekers with manifold precious chances of self-improvement. 跳槽给求职者提供了多元的自我提升的机会。

  3. Job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant sense of refreshment. 跳槽意味着广阔的人生和工作的阅历,持久的新鲜感。

  【三段】第二次支持单一职业前要从事多元职业:

  Another advantageous aspect stemming from multiple career option is that one could become more competitive and versatile. After all, knowledge is not a burden. More vocational skills could be acquired and the relevant working experience in different fields could be accumulated via taking different kinds of jobs. It is conceivable that a new employee has to learn from other colleagues and resolve unfamiliar crisis in order to adapt to the new working environment. His or her sociability, viability and adaptability will be quickly cultivated when braving new career challenges.

  【解析】

  1. Another advantageous aspect stemming from …… is that …… 另外一个来自……的优势就在于……

  2. knowledge is not a burden 艺多不压身

  3. it is conceivable that ……可以想象的是……

  4. His or her sociability, viability and adaptability will be quickly fostered when braving new career challenges. 当人勇敢面对新事业挑战的时候,其社交能力,生存能力和适应能力可以被培养。

  【三段】第三次支持单一职业前要从事多元职业:

  To make my final point, to take up jobs in diverse fields enables one to enlarge his or her circle of friends so that one could establish well-connected interpersonal network. Better human resources, to some extent, mean more precocious opportunities of job-promotion, comfortable salary and even the possibility of carving out own one career. For example,My Uncle Paul has been embarking on self-employment for more than five years, his achievement in career can be greatly attributed to his well-connected interpersonal relationship, which has been accumulated by undertaking diverse jobs.

  【解析】

  1. the possibility of carving out own one career v 自我创业的可能

  2. His achievement in career can be greatly attributed to his well-connected interpersonal relationship, which has been accumulated by undertaking diverse jobs. 叔叔保罗创业的成功很大程度上可以被归结为良好的人脉资源,而这些资源都是通过多元职业而积累的。

  【尾段】再次亮明作家立场:

  In a nutshell, I once again re-confirm my position that multiple career choice is superior to focusing on a single career,therefore, it is wise to try different jobs before selecting a lifelong career. Although undertaking a lifelong career from the beginning of getting employed might means career stability and financial security, there exists something more significant than those so-called merits in the long run.

  【解析】

  1. in a nutshell, I once again re-confirm my position that …… 总之,我再次重申我方立场……

  2. Multiple career choice is superior to focusing on a single career. 多元职业优越于单一职业选择。

  3. It is wise to try different jobs before selecting a lifelong career. 选择终生事业之前,尝试多元职业是明智的。

  【经典语料】

  1. take different kinds of jobs = embark on multiple jobs v从事多样的工作

  2. take different kinds of jobs = take up a rich variety of employments v从事多样的工作

  3. take a career in a long term = focus on a single career v专注于一份事业

  4. take a career in a long term = to experience job-transition = to experience the job hopping v体验跳槽

  5. in order to find out their interests and tap their infinite potentials v为了找到兴趣所在及开发无限的潜能

  6. acquire more knowledge and accumulate more experience v学习更多的知识和积累更多的经验

  7. acquire more vocational skills and accumulate relevant working experience v学习多样的职业技能和积累相关的工作经验

  8. make more new friends = enlarge one’s circle of friends v 扩大交友圈

  9. sociability, viability and adaptability n社交能力,生存能力,适应能力

  10. establish well-connected interpersonal network v建立起良好的人脉网络

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