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2016-07-19 10:06:07来源：新东方在线 李盛

　　然后我们可以讲城市生活与乡村生活进行对比，完成第三步骤：

　　By contrast, people living in the city are suffering from various diseases caused by the environmental contamination, for pollutants from factories and automobiles are continually being discharged into the air and rivers.

　　接着我们通过一个具体的例子去把问题阐述地更加清晰：

　　Take my bother, Tom, as an example. Tom had lived in the country with my grandparents for twelve years before he went to the city to enter middle school. When he was living in the countryside, he seldom fell ill and enjoyed himself in the nature every day. Since he went to the city, he gradually felt his throat sore and often coughed. When he was sent to the hospital, the doctor said that it was because of the air pollution, especially the smog, caused by the exhausted gas of automobiles and the pollutants discharged by the factories. So Tom had to wear masks in bad weather. Last summer, he went back to the countryside to spend his vacation, and the next week he arrived, his cough stopped and he felt much better.

　　最后我们只需要简单地对例子进行小结，呼应主题句就可以了：

　　It is clear that the good environment in the countryside is beneficial to our health.

　　将上面的内容连接起来，就形成了一个完整的重点段落：

　　In the first place, living in the country contributes to our health. As is known to all, in the country there are few industrial plants and vehicles so that fewer pollutants are emitted into the water and air. As a result, we can enjoy the blue sky, clean water, fresh air and healthy food, which contributes to our health. By contrast, people living in the city are suffering from various diseases caused by the environmental contamination, for pollutants from factories and automobiles are continually being discharged into the air and rivers. Take my bother, Tom, as anexample. Tom had lived in the country with my grandparents for twelve yearsbefore he went to the city to enter middle school. When he was living in thecountryside, he seldom fell ill and enjoyed himself in the nature every day.Since he went to the city, he gradually felt his throat sore and often coughed.When he was sent to the hospital, the doctor said that it was because of theair pollution, especially the smog, caused by the exhausted gas of automobilesand the pollutants discharged by the factories. So Tom had to wear masks in badweather. Last summer, he went back to the countryside to spend his vacation,and the next week he arrived, his cough stopped and he felt much better. It is clear that the good environment in the countryside is beneficial to our health.

　　这样看来，独立写作是不是并没有想象中的那么难呢?

　　在TOEFL iBT Official Guide(托福官方指南，以下简称OG)中明确指出托福独立写作有三大考查维度：Development(展开论点)，Organization(组织文章结构)和Language Use(语言运用)。因此，除了注意作文的内容和结构外，阅卷老师同样十分注重我们在作文中表现出来的语言基本功。不管我们的观点多么精妙，证据多么充分，结构多么合理，如果语言错误百出，就不可能在写作部分得到高分。所以同学们在平时的学习中也别忘了语言的积累。

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