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托福写作考试

托福写作由两部分组成,第一部分为综合写作(The Integrated Writing Task),第二部分为独立写作(The Independent Writing Task)。

独立写作简介

独立写作部分要求考生在30分钟之内就某个话题完成一篇300字以上的文章。

1.典型题目

◆ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and details to support you answer.

你是否赞成下列观点:跟团旅行是最佳旅行方式?

请用具体原因详细论证你的观点。

2.评分标准

◆ HOW WELL YOU DEVELOP YOUR IDEAS(观点是否充分展开)

◆ HOW WELL YOU ORGANIZE YOUR ESSAY(文章结构是否有条理)

◆ HOW WELL YOU USE LANGUAGE OR EXPRESS YOUR IDEAS(语言运用与观点表达是否恰当准确)

3.满分(5分)作文评分标准

◆ effectively addresses the writing topic and task(有效地阐明了主题)

◆ is well developed and well organized, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and / or details(运用了明确恰当的论据使论点充分展开,结构有条理)

◆ displays unity, progression, and coherence(文章保持统一性、渐进性和连贯性)

◆ displays consistent facility in the use of the language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity(语言流畅,句法多样,用词恰当、地道)

托福高分范文大全目录

1.Movies:serious or entertaining?

严肃电影还是娱乐电影?

2.Is relating well to others more important than studying hard?

搞好人际关系比努力学习更重要吗?

3.Do grades encourage students to learn?

分数鼓励学生学习吗?

4.Is daily homework necessary for students?

学生有必要每天都做家庭作业吗?

5.Is the ability to write well more important than that of speaking?

写作能力比口语能力更重要吗?

6.What can help you to succeed?

什么能帮助你走向成功?

7.Is it more important to work quickly with risks making mistakes than to work slowly with everything correct?

冒着犯错误的风险高速地工作比确保万无一失地缓慢工作更重要吗?

8.Is it essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize?

年轻人必须具备组织管理才能吗?

9.Shouldn't people pay for public transportation?

人们应该免费搭乘公共交通工具吗?

10.Land: for human needs or for endangered animals?

土地用于人类需求还是濒危动物?

11.Should the government focus more on preserving natural environment and less on economic development?

政府应当更加注重环保,并减少对经济发展的重视程度吗?

12.Should people work in the same company or for thesame employer for their whole life?

人们应在同一家公司或为同一个雇主效力终生吗?

13.Should young people try different jobs before they decide on their long-termjob or career?

年轻人应当在决定长期从事的职业之前先尝试做不同的工作吗?

14.Is it advisable for teenage children to take part-time jobs?

十几岁的孩子做兼职工作可取吗?

15.Are some scientists responsible for the negative impacts made by their discoveries?

有些科学家应对其科学发现所产生的负面影响负责吗?

16.Is advertising the main cause of unhealthy eating habits?

广告是导致不健康饮食习惯的主要原因吗?

17.Does playing sports teach us about life?

体育运动教给人们人生的道理吗?

18.Are environmental issues too complex to be handled by the individual?

由于环境问题过于复杂,个人是无法应对的吗?

19.The most important things for governments to do to improve health care

政府为改善医疗保健需做的最重要的工作

20.The only way the government can conserve energy

政府保护能源的唯一途径

21.Were people friendlier in the past than they are today?

过去的人们比现在的人们更友好吗?

22.Is visiting museums the best way to learn about a country?

了解一个国家最好的方法就是参观博物馆吗?

23.Choosing a subject that interests you or one preparing you for a better job or career?

选择一门你感兴趣的学科还是选择职业倾向性强的学科?

24.Is traveling in a group led by a tour guide the best way to travel?

跟团旅行是最好的旅行方式吗?

25.Should the government focus its budget more on young children's education rather than on universities?

政府应将更多预算投入到青少年教育上而非高等教育上吗?

26.A large company or a small one, which do you want to work for?

就职于大公司还是小公司?

27.Making friends with intelligent people or with humorous people?

与聪明人交朋友还是与幽默的人交朋友?

28.Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy your friendship?

让一个朋友犯错误胜过说一些可能伤害友情的话或做一些可能伤害友情的事?

29.Advice: from friends older than you or from those of your age?

建议:采纳来自年长朋友的还是同龄朋友的?

30.Do some people like to spend time alone when relaxing?

放松的时候,有些人喜欢独处?

31.Are students more influenced by their teachers

than by their friends?学生受老师的影响比受朋友的影响更多吗?

32.Should the most important education for students be conducted in the classroom, but not out of the classroom?

对学生最重要的教育是在教室里进行的,而不是教室外?

33.Is knowledge gained through study more important than the ability to be creative?

通过学习收获的知识比创新能力更重要?

34.Finishing a project completely then to another one or doing two or several projects at a time?

先彻底完成一个项目再转向另一个项目,还是同时进行两个或两个以上的项目?

35.Solving questions using our own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice?

利用自己的知识和经验还是询问他人的建议来解决问题?

36.Is it a good method to give the same grade to all the members who do the same project together?

每个组员都获得相同的分数是评价他们的好办法吗?

37.Is it better to select broad subjects than specialize in a specific subject?

选择宽泛的学科比专注于一门学科更好?

38.Should drivers pay a certain amount of fees in order to be permitted to drive out in traffic busy time?

司机应该缴纳一定的费用以获得在交通高峰时段驾驶的许可吗?

39.Is the extended family less important than it was before?

大家庭没有过去重要了吗?

40.Will people reduce car use in 20 years?

20年后,人们会减少对汽车的使用吗?

41.Spending money on something that lasts for a long time, or something that provides a short-termpleasure?

把钱花在保存时间较长的物品上还是短期享受上?

42.Is it difficult for people to know whom to believe or who is telling the truth because of so many sources of information?

由于太多的信息资源,人们已经很难分辨谁是可以信任的,谁说的是真话?

43.Do people benefit more from traveling in their owncountry than in a foreign country?

比起国外游,人们更得益于国内游?

44.Choosing a job: one with more vacation time, or one with high paying but less vacation time?

选择何种工作:较多假期的工作,还是高薪但假期短的工作?

45.Has technology made children less creative than they were in the past?

科技是否使孩子们不如以前那么有创造力了?

46.Should governments spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics?

政府应该投入更多资金支持艺术,而不是竞技体育?

47.Is one's working more important than being with one's family?

工作比与家人共处更重要吗?

48.Won't students use printed books any more in 20 years?

20年以后,学生将不再使用纸质图书?

49. Is physical exercise more important for older people than younger people?

比起年轻人,体育锻炼对老年人更重要?

50.Could people learn more from watching television than reading books?

比起读书,人们可以从看电视中学到更多的东西?

托福满分作文

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? lt's better to watchserious movies to get deeper thoughts than to watch movies that amuse orentertain you.

The world's movie industry has witnessed unprecedented boom in recent years. Delighted with an ample supply of excellent motion pictures, global audiences are thankful for the combined efforts made by film crews. Among these popular productions, serious movies and entertaining movies are the most influential. Some viewers are in favor of the former, saying serious ones evoke deeper thoughts, while other fans support the latter due to their humor. According to my preference, I would express my appreciation for serious movies.

To begin with, one of the most essential goals in movie- making is to enrich people's inner world. To some extent, serious movies are playing the role of pilots that can guide people psychologically. Books can provide humans with foodfor thought and so can serious movies. An outstanding serious movie encourages the audience to make full use of their imaginations and common sense to think logically. Normally, mysteries are hidden in these movies so as to arouse people's curiosity. With a burning desire to find the answer, the viewers try hard to find the answer before the movie concludes. One example is a classic movie entitled Murder on the Orient Express. The plot is so thought- provoking that viewers are turned into detectives themselves. In the movie, a murder is committed on the train and a number of passengers are brought under suspicion. Motivated to discover the real murderer, viewers are willing to make their own judgment. Needless to say, watching such a movie is just like going on an unforgettable inner journey.

In addition, the social and historical background of serious movies provides people with an opportunity to comprehend a vast amount of knowledge. The complicated social reality as well as what is lying deeper inside can also be sensed. Gone with the Wind, a most popular movie starring Clark Gable and Vivien Leigh, presents a story during the Civil War. The social realities during that special period in history were vividly shown in the plots. Another example is Tom Hank's master work Forrest Gump. A series of historic events are also included inside the movie. The legendary life of Forest Gump leaves a profound impression on all audiences. His frequent encounters of epoch-making events, his unique way of thinking and his attitude toward life along with his loving heart have made him a forever hero in people's minds.

Even though movies for amusement help people feel relaxed and happy for a while, they might soon be forgotten. By contrast, the influences of serious movies last longer and are more easily treasured as memories. After all, the best art is to be remembered, not to be forgotten. As a matter of fact, seldom do I watch funny movies more than once. After a temporary laugh, nothing meaningful is left, whereas serious movies are cherished as treasures which are appreciated as often as possible. Each viewing will bring about fresh thoughts or deeper comprehension.

Therefore, the merits encompassed within serious movies far outweigh those of funny movies. No matter which feature attracts the largest audience, all producers of serious movies, the directors and the actors, continue their efforts of creating more memorable works. As long as the film industry advances toward further development, fans of serious movies are always ready to render their support.

近年来,世界电影业经历了前所未有的繁荣。全球观众对优秀影片的充足供应颇感满意,并且对电影工作者所作出的共同努力充满了感激之情。在这些受欢迎的作品中,严肃电影和娱乐电影堪称最有影响的两大类。一些观众偏好前者,认为严肃电影可以启发更深入的思考,而其他观众因影片中充满幽默而支持后者。对于我

而言,我更欣赏严肃电影。

首先,电影制作的最基本目标之一在于丰富人们的内心世界。从某种程度来说,严肃电影犹如给予人们心灵引导的领航员。书能够为人类提供精神食粮,严肃电影亦然。一部杰出的严肃电影鼓励观众充分利用其想象力和常识进行逻辑思考。这些电影中通常隐含一些奥秘以激发人们的好奇心。抱着揭开谜底的强烈渴望,观众在影片结束之前会试图自己寻找答案。经典影片《东方快车谋杀案》就是一个范例。其情节引人入胜,就连观众自己也变成了侦探。影片中,火车上发生了一起谋杀案,某些乘客遭到了怀疑。期待找出真正凶手的观众宁愿作出自己的判断。很显然,观看此类电影就如同进行一次难忘的心灵之旅。

此外,严肃电影中的社会与历史背景为人们提供了一个领悟大量知识的机会。同时,复杂的社会现实以及其根源也可获得观众的认知。《飘》(又名《乱世佳人》)是一部由克拉克·盖博和费雯·丽共同主演的佳作。影片讲述了一个发生于美国内战期间的故事,故事情节生动地展现出那个特殊历史时期的社会现实。汤姆·汉克斯的代表作《阿甘正传》是另一部典范之作。一系列历史性事件也出现在此影片当中。阿甘的传奇生活给观众留下了深刻的印象。他屡次遭遇的划时代的重大事件,他独特的思维方式以及他对生活的态度和温暖的爱心使他成为人们心中永远的英雄。

尽管娱乐电影能够使人们暂时放松并开心起来,但它们可能很快就会被遗忘。相比之下,严肃电影的影响则会更长久地持续,且更容易珍藏于记忆中。不管怎样,最好的艺术是要被铭记于心而并非被忘记的。事实上,我几乎不看幽默电影。(幽默电影)在一阵笑声过后,留不下任何有价值的东西。相反,严肃电影却可被视如至宝,并可不厌其烦地屡次观看,每一次观赏都会激发新鲜的想法或更深入的理解。

因此,严肃电影的优点远远超过了幽默电影。无论哪类电影吸引最多的观众,所有严肃电影的从业者,包括导演和演员在内,会继续致力于创作更令人难忘的作品。只要电影行业的发展步伐还未停止,严肃电影的影迷们就会始终给予不懈的支持。

注释

unprecedented adj. 空前的,史无前例的

boomn. 繁荣

an ample supply of 充足的供应

in favor of 支持;赞同

to begin with 首先

to some extent 在某种程度上,在一定程度上

...provide humans with food for thought 为人类提供精神食粮(此句中provide...with...为固定搭配,表示“为……提供……”。)

Murder on the Orient Express 《东方快车谋杀案》(此电影根据英国侦探小说女王阿加莎·克里斯蒂(Agatha Christie)同名小说改编。)commit vt. 犯罪;做错事

bring...under suspicion 使……遭到猜疑

needless to say 毫无疑问,不用说

go on a journey 去旅行;启程

in addition 此外,另外

Gone with the Wind 《飘》

Forrest Gump《阿甘正传》(根据同名小说改编的美国电影,小说作者为温斯顿·格卢姆(Winston Groom)。电影荣获1995年最佳影片奖、最佳男主角奖、最佳导演奖等6项奥斯卡大奖。)

a series of 一系列的;一连串的

leave a profound impression on... 给……留下深刻的印象

epoch-making adj. 划时代的;开创新纪元的;意义重大的

along with 连同……一起;与……一道

bring about 引起,导致

encompass vt. 包含;包围,环绕

far outweigh 远远超过

memorable adj. 难忘的;值得纪念的

as long as 只要

render vt. 给予

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