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托福口语练习之友谊类话题精彩回答示例

2016-10-14 17:16:00来源：网络

　　为了帮助大家熟悉托福独立口语答题方法，高效备考托福口语，新东方在线托福网为大家带来托福独立口语友谊类话题精彩回答一文，希望对大家托福备考有所帮助。更多精彩尽请关注新东方在线托福网!

　　精彩回答

　　观点：a private room更好

　　1个理由：更安静，可以听清彼此的说法，

　　能更好地解决问题

　　I’d like to choose a private room rather than a public place to solve the problem with my friend(干脆利落的回答题目)because private room is much quiet to hear from each other (语法错误)so that the problem will be settle down (存在偶发的、不障碍理解的语法错误，被动语态语法错误)better.

　　1个例子：和朋友现在公共场合解决不好，又去a private room解决了!非常好!

　　For example, last month, I and my best friend, Jenny, had a disagreement on deciding which play is gonna to play on class. So we decided to have a meal together in the public restaurant to settle down the problem(表达错误). But it turned out to be an unpleasant meal due to the chaotic (用词不精准)and noisy environment. Both of us were annoyed at that moment, not to mention to solve the problem.(语法错误) But after we returned to the dormitory, it was much comfortable to have a talk.

　　缺点：

　　逻辑：只说了回宿舍去谈更舒适，但没说：问题到底解决了没?感觉舒服，跟问题得到解决是两码事。

　　语法：存在偶发的、不障碍理解的语法错误(如：被动语态be settled down被说成了be settle down)

　　表达：存在不当表述，错误用词

　　修改过后的回答

　　I’d like to choose a private room rather than a public place to deal with the problem(替换表达)with my friend because a private room is quiet enough for us to hear each other so that the dialogue can be conducted more smoothly and the problem will be settled down more efficiently.(观点+原因+对比论证的回答一气呵成，托福口语中一定要锻炼讲原因的能力)

　　For example, last month, my best friend, Jenny, and I had a disagreement over the choice of the drama played in class.(具体的事例法)So we decided to have a meal in a restaurant to talk about it. But it ended up as an unpleasant one due to the noisy environment. Both of us were annoyed at that moment, let alone solved the problem. By contrast, after returning to the dormitory, where we felt more comfortable to talk, we finally reached an agreement.

　　修改后的回答有观点明确，巧妙运用一个有对比的例子诠释了理由，描述例子时始终记得使用过去时，全文始终注意变换表达，发音超清晰!简单来说就是有具体的例子，有比较，构思巧妙，内容丰满，有一定的语音语调，评分good档。

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