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托福综合写作优秀作文练习题：老美的四天工作制

2015-04-06 10:12:00来源：网络

　　托福综合写作阅读词汇补充：(欢迎补充)

　　阅读部分表达方法：passage, material

　　听力部分表达方法：lecture, the professors says

　　同意: say, argue, claim, opinion, hold the view that, figure, deem,believe, reckon, consider, opinion, proposition,

　　反对：on contrary, by contrast, argue against, refute, object, hold atotally different view, oppose, be against.

　　TIP：在行文过程中，需要变化的是表示同意或者反对的功能性词汇，而表示阅读部分和听力部分的指代型词汇请不要变化。就像你跟人介绍我，不能在整个过程中说沐浴、沐沐、达芙妮、muyuruc，这样会让听者或者读者摸不到头绪的，我们语言多样性的表达要用在需要的地方。

　　托福综合写作阅读文章结构：

　　第一段：要表达的内容有：passage部分的主观点，lecture 部分的主观点，以及两者之间的关系。

　　第二段：passage部分的sub point 1，lecture部分对应的sub point，lecture里面相对应的support和details。

　　第三段：passage部分的sub point 2，lecture部分对应的sub point，lecture里面相对应的support和details。

　　第四段：passage部分的sub point 3，lecture部分对应的sub point，lecture里面相对应的support和details。

　　TIP：没有必要在文章中出现passage部分的support和details，或者说不能出现。

　　托福综合写作范文(仅供参考)：

　　The passage argues that four-day work weekwill benefit companies, the whole economy, and individuals. But in the lecture,the professor holds a totally different view that no one will be beneficialfrom the new work week.

　　Firstly, the passage says that companieswill get more profits for employees can work more effectively. However, thelecture points out that four-day workweek will lead to spend more. That isbecause companies have to spend more money on training, medical benefits,office positions, even new computers.

　　Secondly, the passage claims that the wholeeconomy will benefit, for the four-day workweek is a way to reduce unemploymentrates. The lecture refutes the idea completely. Admittedly, there are moreavailable jobs, but companies will prefer to let employees work overtime tofinish them for hiring new staff is too expensive. In addition, the companiesmay lift their expectation that staff finish five-day jobs within four-day.

　　Thirdly, the passage suggests thatindividual employees can benefit from it. Though the four-day workweek canprovide more leisure time to employees, the lecture argues against the passage.

　　Comparing to five-day workers, the four-dayworkweek employees may be the first one to be fire during economic depression.And they will have less chance to promotion because companies wish thatmanagers could be on duty every work day.


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