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手把手教你如何写出托福写作满分作文

2016-03-14 14:50:26来源:新东方 薛鹏

  〖尾段〗亮明观点

  In a word, ① it may seem that people spend too much time on doing things that have no relation to the really important things. In fact, these things might be the really meaningful things to us.

  〖点评〗 ① it may seem that 作者想表达“似乎是”,但是,正确的写法是 it seems that

  〖润色〗

  In closing, it seems that we sometimes spend too much time on doing things that have little relevance to what really matters. Virtually, these things might be the really meaningful to us.

  〖解析〗

  1. in closing, it seems that 总之,似乎是  2. have little relevance to 和……关系不大  3. what really matters 正在重要的事情  4. virtually adv实际上

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