新东方在线网络课堂 托福 新东方在线 > 托福 > 托福写作 > 正文

高手支招:改进托福写作常见病句50例

2010-01-28 00:00:00 来源:新东方托福资料下载

    · 2010年托福考试时间表
    · 新托福网考经验谈:注重技巧能力和速度
    · 新东方名师解读托福高分秘籍

\


  1. The artist"s work pushes our civilization to a higher level。

  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization。

  2. For example, you work in a big factory。

  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory。

  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。

  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。

  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。

  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。

  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。

  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life。

  6. Their brain is still very young。

  改进: They are still immature。

  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。

  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。

  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。

  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong。

  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。

  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time。

  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life。

  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。

  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development。

  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development。

  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money。

  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。

  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。

  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。

  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money。

  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more。

  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products。

  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products。

  16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills。

  改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills。

  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians。

  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand。

  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body。

  改进: This knowledge will become part of you。

  19. They cannot think clearly。

  改进: They cannot think straight。

  20. Money can improve their living standard。

  改进: Money can improve their life。

  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money。

  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money。

  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life。

  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life。

  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later。

  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn。

  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano。

  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes。

  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others。

  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others。

  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing。

  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal。

  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind。

  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax。

  28. What's about nonsmokers?

  改进: What about nonsmokers?

  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life。

  改进: Everyone has friends in his life。

  31. I am not good at maths, but English

  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English。

  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

  33.It is children who clear about their interests。

  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests。

  34. I agree the latter idea。

  改进: I agree with the latter idea。

  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo。

  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo。

  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now。

  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe。

  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are。

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn。

  38. No one knows all the things。

  改进: No one knows everything。

  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life。

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life。

  40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages。

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages。

  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up。

  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply。

  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor。

  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor。

  43. They will learn the bad habits。

  改进: They will develop bad habits。

  44. In this continued process, people make progress。

  改进: In this cycle, people make progress。

  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary。

  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary。

  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency。

  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings。

  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact。

  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result。

  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing。

  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream。

  49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost。

  改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss。

  50. I felt alone。

  改进: I felt lonely。

 

   相关文章:

    >>> 如何搞定新托福阅读理解题

    >>> 雅思听力和托福听力的异同

    >>> 新东方名师支招托福口语备考

    >>> 托福高分经验:新东方、资料与单项备考

 

为你特别匹配的托福超值课程,快速提分先人一步!
  • 托福听力寒假如何备考

    【免费直播】托福听力寒假如何备考

    适合人群:寒假备战托福的筒子们!!!

    课时:2

    查看详情
  • 托福写作寒假如何备考

    【免费直播】托托福写作寒假如何备考

    适合人群:寒假备战托福的筒子们!!!

    课时:2

    查看详情
  • 【21天冲分】 托福2月临考急训25人班

    【21天冲分】 托福2018年2月临考急训25人班

    适合人群:2018年2月考托福 需要考前急训火速提分的同学

    课时:直播54小时 录播104小时

    查看详情
  • TPO第53套名师解析

    【托福独门秘籍】TPO第53套名师解析

    适合人群:为最新TPO53而来的小可爱~

    课时:8

    查看详情
  • TPO第52套名师解析

    【托福独门秘籍】TPO第52套名师解析

    适合人群:为最新TPO52而来的小可爱~

    课时:4

    查看详情

课程试听换一换

  • 知心托福 大学生旗舰直达班 (冲110分)

    ¥7286.4

  • 知心托福 直达班(冲110分)

    ¥3854.4

  • 知心托福 直达班(冲90分)

    ¥3414.4

  • 知心托福 大学生旗舰直达班 (冲100分)

    ¥7022.4

  • 知心托福 精品直达班(冲110分)

    ¥5174.4

  • 知心托福 中学生旗舰直达班 (冲110分)

    ¥7286.4

  • 托福 TOEFL单项突破班-口语

    ¥1742.4

  • 知心托福 精品直达班(冲100分)

    ¥4998.4

分享到:

相关推荐

  • 托福听力寒假如何备考
  • 托福写作寒假如何备考
  • 托福寒假招募
  • 托福听力备考全攻略
  • 致赢托福一对六暑期班
  • 托福考试指南_托福新生必修课
  • 新东方雅思托福GRE词汇量在线测试

热点资讯更多>>

实用 • 工具

托福课程排行榜本周本月

交流 • 下载

托福公开课更多>>

新东方在线景龙潭:托福阅读否定事实信息题精讲 w 19分07秒
1 新东方在线景龙潭:托福阅读否定事实信息题精讲
新东方在线刘静:托福口语task1人物类话题精讲 w 04分27秒
2 新东方在线刘静:托福口语task1人物类话题精讲
新东方在线刘蕊:怎样解决托福听力听不懂的问题 w 14分36秒
3 新东方在线刘蕊:怎样解决托福听力听不懂的问题
新东方在线宋旭:托福综合写作如何表达阅读和听力精讲 w 08分29秒
4 新东方在线宋旭:托福综合写作如何表达阅读和听力精讲
新东方在线吴迪:托福阅读中的句子插入题精讲  w 13分01秒
5 新东方在线吴迪:托福阅读中的句子插入题精讲 

推荐阅读